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I am Umbreon(Tigereye) from the old site. But no, I am, Groot.
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Post by Groot (Tigereye) on Aug 13, 2014 2:18:17 GMT
-HUMAN- Username: Groot (Tigereye)Character Name: Kiyanna, Jule, Arslin. Nickname: Kiya Character Age: 20 Character Gender: Female Character Sexuality: Bisexual, but more attracted to males. Character Description: Blonde female with Pink dyed into her hair. She has a slim body, but very wide hips. Kiya normally wears grey and blue, and red, green, or yellow shoes. She has beautiful blue eyes that seem gray, and wears a bit too much mascara. The young adult has beautiful, curly/waved hair. Character Personality: Kiya is a very kind, caring girl. She is also very flirty(in a subtle way) and well, slightly annoying. She has barely any patience, but is an excellent fighter. Kiyanna also hates having her name pronounced wrong, and gets very angry at people if they insult her for liking both genders. Character Weapon: Two sharp daggers. One is very dull. Both given to her by her father, who taught her how to fight. Character Family: Dad, Alex, James, Arslin(deceased), Mom, Julia, Sandra, Arslin(married into. Original: Hessenhef. Unknown if Deceased or Alive.) Character Crush: Jay Character History (Optional): Making later on!>
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Dan Howell and Phil Lester's future third wheel.
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Post by Silver on Aug 20, 2014 0:45:27 GMT
Not a long enough personality, and you need to change that. It also seems like for the description you're just throwing in sentences so that you fit the maximum like "The young adult has beautiful, curly/waved hair." Due to these problems I ask you to write out a history that is at least 5 sentences long to see if your roleplay ability is sufficient.
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